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UPDATE: Launched my clothing lines 2019 Summer Collection... what do you think BX?

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 3 weeks ago '13        #125
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MGz09 17 heat pts17
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UPDATE: Launched my clothing lines 2019 Summer Collection... what do you think BX?
 

 
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What up BX. Been a really bad past half year or so (personally) but we finally managed to drop our summer collection. Every time I post an update here I always get a ton of support and a good 10-15 of you buy some gear. There's also some of you that got me on Instagram that always show love. I can't thank yall enough!

Foreign Dreams Summer Shorts 2019



Link to cop: visit this link https://foreigndreamsco.c .. nk-camo-shorts

Link to cop: visit this link https://foreigndreamsco.c .. ack-red-shorts


Foreign Dreams Summer Tees 2019


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Link to cop: visit this link https://foreigndreamsco.c .. ee-white-black

Link to cop: visit this link https://foreigndreamsco.c .. ee-black-white

Link to cop: visit this link https://foreigndreamsco.c .. tee-blue-white

We also have most of our previous items on sale on our website.

You guys can check out my website @ visit this link http://www.foreigndreamsco.com
Our Instagram is @foreigndreamsco


Since you guys always show love, you can use code ONTHEHOUSE for free shipping.

Website only accepts PayPal. I also accept cashapp/venmo/zelle etc

Once again, I appreciate all the support! Let me know if you have any questions. Also, I am always open to feedback.

To cop: visit this link Http://www.foreigndreamsco.com

God Bless


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 3 weeks ago '19        #124
Rico Black 1 heat pts
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I see the progression homie, keep grinding. That said, a couple thoughts:

Technical Elements:

1.) Right now, likely 100% of your site traffic's coming from referrals (forums, social media, email list, etc.); you might consider adding a Facebook pixel so you can retarget (and keep visibility of) viewers.

2.) Your site's page title won't help in organic search as it's mostly the kinds of payment options you accept. At most, you'll get branded searches, which won't do anything because anyone who knows you exist won't be searching for clothing brands organically.

3.) Your current meta description contains: "Clothing, Foreign Dreams, Luxury Brand", 3 near-impossible keywords to rank for, especially as a newer site.

General Attributes:
1.) Your current page speed is a little slow. While it differs with where you check, speeding up the site in general is a crucial thing in 2019. Here's a couple speed reports to look at:

PageSpeed Insights:

GTMetrix:

Markup:
1.) There's no Schema markup on your pages. Having markup helps Google understand the page's purpose, and generate rich snippets and features that help you stand out in search. Here's a few that you can use as an ecommerce store:



UX:
1.) While nice, clean and simple, the image pushes the content nearly below the fold. I'd shorten the height and throw a call-to-action overlay with a button to make people move.

2.) "Shop" brings you to , which doesn't help direct traffic. I would change it to "Mens", "Womens", etc. to keep people moving forward in the sales cycle.

3.) There's not enough copy on the product pages themselves.

There should be a fair amount of descriptive text including:

- color
- size
- fabric
- materials
- where they're sourced from
- example uses
- how it was made
- who it's designed for

The more description you have, the more confidence prospective buyers will have in buying it.

Toss me a duffle, a couple of those hats and a hoodie, a pair of them shorts and I'll not only tell you how to fix these things (and the things that'd be way too much to type), I'll create an easy-to-use digital marketing playbook for you and your team to build your brand even more.


Last edited by Rico Black; 05-31-2019 at 04:52 PM..
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 3 weeks ago '15        #123
WightAroundYo 2 heat pts
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You black? Im only supporting black owned this summer

sh*t dope tho
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 3 weeks ago '05        #122
Scorpz 8 heat pts
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If u looking to make some new dope shirt designs PM me..
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 3 weeks ago '13        #121
MGz09 17 heat pts17 OP
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 myPOWER said
Ay, cant say Im a fan of the design but major respect and props for still grinding.

I remember when you just started this and made a thread asking for thoughts.

How long ago did you start?
Appreciate all feedback bro! Came out with the idea January 2017, and released first products June/July 2017.

 VicDamone said
Do you ship to Canada? I would love to support your clothing. Respect
Never have but I will get back to you on that one once I figure it out lol. Appreciate it fam.

 HBK Kickstand said
Fire ..right in time for summer too. Will definitely order at least 2 pairs of shorts when I get off work. Even better knowing my money will go to somebody here starting their own business. Respect . Im kind of on the bigger side, you think a 2xl would fit a 38 waist ?
With the exception of the pink camo shorts, they all fit like basketball shorts. I'd say a tad bit longer than your basic Nike ones everyone has. We are limited on 2XL's but if you place an order today we can def. get them from our supplier by this weekend if we do not have the ones you want in stock

 Rule 336 said
I'm bout to order. What size should I cop if my waist size is 34
I'd say Medium bro. Appreciate you

 Sithon said
@ I fu*k with your brand mane... Im sharing your website link with some of my stylish folk in ATL and TN
You a real one bro, appreciate it. God bless.

 ladondaddy said
Pink n purple ballin shorts type cold! Ball a n*gga up wit da pink foams or sumn
Man I must say it feels to be ballin people up in your own clothing shorts lol

 KoBronRant said
fu*ks wit them shorts fam ima have grab some today
 Timberwolves said
Will be ordering
 BaltimoresSon said
Dope fam. Im definitely about to grab them pink chamo #SALUTE. Bout to put you in my IG story
 poppadoc101 said
Them shorts are a go, especially the camo. Definitely gonna cop!!
Appreciate you guys, fr

 Faseforeal1 said
I like the shirts bro. Just a suggestion. Are you producing to be a fad or long term? Always keep that in mind. If I get some paper(laid off back surgery) I will definitely support!
I'd say long term since we are doing this more so as a hobby at the moment. We just love wearing our own custom made clothing and a lot of people out here fu*ked with it so we are pushing out more now. Appreciate the support and wish you a quick recovery bro.
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 3 weeks ago '04        #120
Grisly 38 heat pts38
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the shirt with the FD rose logo is very dope
would go tight with the black red green shorts
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 3 weeks ago '17        #119
AllWins 6 heat pts
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I like the design a lot. Props.

The shorts are cool, but the logo is too big IMO.

I dont mind brandishing a logo, but not that big. Im picky.

Keep up the hustle !
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 3 weeks ago '15        #118
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Decent.



The branding is not to my liking, but I cant knock the hustle.
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 3 weeks ago '16        #117
JustVibe 7 heat pts
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Love the shorts bro !!!
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 3 weeks ago '08        #116
DAHNIC 
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Show us more of these Famz!!!...Wit them lil Shorts want to make sure the look good on my Shorty...lol...




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 3 weeks ago '13        #115
saintluc 4 heat pts
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I like!
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 3 weeks ago '15        #114
R WiZ 
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Red Black & Green shorts are a go
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 3 weeks ago '13        #113
MGz09 17 heat pts17 OP
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 kingjab7542 said
This is gonna sound terrible but...op are you black ? If so Im coping for sure
Lmaooooo. I'm not but i'm still one of yall

 Shere Khan said
This is some nice lookin stuff. You based in LA?

I throw my money at local LA made sh*t 100 times faster than big name brands. Im gonna put in an order.
Yessir. West Covina/Riverside bro. Appreciate that!

 dman1209 said
Clean af. Hook yo bx n*ggas with a one time discount though
I put up a free shipping code up there fam. Thanks for the support!

Received 4 orders so far. I love yall BX

I am throwing in a free bandana for all orders made today instead of the first 3.

GOD BLESS
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 3 weeks ago '17        #112
Rule 336 119 heat pts119
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 Spot Rusherz said
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In stock?



These sh*ts is fire
Yes I ordered a pair.



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 3 weeks ago '19        #111
zzxxccvvbb 4 heat pts
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Looks you already smoked that IG Thot's clothing line

Good on ya, bro!
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 3 weeks ago '14        #110
Sithon 98 heat pts98
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@ I fu*k with your brand mane... Im sharing your website link with some of my stylish folk in ATL and TN
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 3 weeks ago '13        #109
MGz09 17 heat pts17 OP
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 HawgNDaGame said
Do the shorts fit like those Mitchell & Ness swingman?
Kind of just a bit heavier. I play basketball with them too.

 JustVibe said
Love the shorts bro !!!
Appreciate it fam!
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 3 weeks ago '13        #108
MGz09 17 heat pts17 OP
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 Rule 336 said
Can we order online?
Sure can;
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 3 weeks ago '15        #107
ladondaddy 
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Pink n purple ballin shorts type cold! Ball a n*gga up wit da pink foams or sumn
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 3 weeks ago '13        #106
MGz09 17 heat pts17 OP
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 Scorpz said
If u looking to make some new dope shirt designs PM me..
Im a designer myself so all the designs are by me.

You design as well?
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 3 weeks ago '13        #105
MGz09 17 heat pts17 OP
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 Rule 336 said
How long is delivery? Got something planned next weekend.. If I ordered today would the item(s) be here before next Saturday?
Standard 3-5 days. It should fam. I’ll put them in the mail tomorrow after work if not Saturday morning.
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 3 weeks ago '13        #104
MGz09 17 heat pts17 OP
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Appreciate the feedback.

First 3 orders will receive a FREE bandana with purchase.
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 3 weeks ago '04        #103
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 Captain Fresh said
Yea them black, green, and red shorts fire
Copping them hoes right now actually sh*ts cold
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 3 weeks ago '05        #102
THEINFAMOUS 21 heat pts21
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Shorts hard.

I been tryna tell my guy to make shorts and sh*t but he don't wanna listen

His IG is IAmClassJay
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 3 weeks ago '16        #101
AfroBucks88 57 heat pts57
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if you had posted your clothing on BX before the designs have really improved and so has the quality of finished product

props
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