I respect the growing confidence and the youtube hustle, but like others said in the other thread, I think you should change it up some. "The I got my own beeznis" is so cringy along with the "If your man ain't treating you right, I'm here to save the day."
I would adjust those lines or stop using it, but hey it's your channel. Is it bringing you views? I think it'll get boring after a while even to the viewer.