Is "Stay Wide Awake" one of the most complex rhyming songs in Rap history?

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 10-19-2009, 05:10 PM         #21
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 slimwillie said:
but you beat them to it so whats that say about you?

 clickclack said:
dear slim i wrote you but you still ain't callin


bx be k!llin me
 10-19-2009, 05:11 PM         #22
AbsLikeJesus 
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Every verse on Way I Am >>>>>>>>>>

I sit back with this pack of zig zags and this bag
Of this weed it gives me the s**t needed to be
The most meanest mc on this -- on this earth
And since birth Ive been cursed with this curse to just curse
And just blurt this berserk and bizarre s**t that works
And it sells and it helps in itself to relieve
All this tension dispensin these sentences
Gettin this stress thats been eatin me recently off of this chest
And I rest again peacefully (peacefully)..
But at least have the decency in you
To leave me alone, when you freaks see me out
In the streets when Im eatin or feedin my daughter
To not come and speak to me (speak to me)..
I dont know you and no,
I dont owe you a mo-therf**k-in thing
Im not mr. nsync, Im not what your friends think
Im not mr. friendly, I can be a prick
If you tempt me my tank is on empty (is on empty)..
No patience is in me and if you offend me
Im liftin you 10 feet (liftin you 10 feet).. in the air
I dont care who is there and who saw me destroy you
Go call you a lawyer, file you a lawsuit
Ill smile in the courtroom and buy you a wardrobe
Im tired of all you (of all you)..
I dont mean to be mean but thats all I can be is just me
 8 years ago '06        #23
Da Realness 2 heat pts
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Pun was the best with the mutli flow. He would rhyme within a line like crazy
 10-19-2009, 05:20 PM         #24
The Blueprint˛ 
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 snoopdoggiz said:
Damn man the RAIDERS? For real?
any given sunday...add to that andy reid can't gameplan to save his life...fourteen runs & forty passes against a number 31 run d will always amount to failure
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 10-19-2009, 05:25 PM         #25
whokid 
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 slimwillie said:


twista is wack
no way is he wack. put him on a song with anyone, he always k!lls it harder than the other MC...

f**k u talkin bout?
 10-19-2009, 05:26 PM         #26
Kumble90 
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 efromthev said:
Not as far as rhyming it's not to me. Like the guy said earlier, the internal rhymes are the second verse are nasty.
The first verse >>>> The second verse IMO.

I think I smell the scent of a placenta
I enter central park its dark its winter in decemba
I see my target with my car and park it at a poacha tenda
Young girl by the name of Brenda and I pretend to befriend her
I sit down beside her like a spider hi there girl you mighta
Heard of me before see wh0ore your the girl that ida
Assault and r*pe and figure why not try to make your pus*y wida
f**k you with the umbrella and open it up while the s**ts inside ya
Im the kinda guy thats mild bt I mite blip in get a little bit wilda
Impregnate a lesbian gal and lets see ya have triplets nd milda
Incinegrate them babies as soon as that out ho with formalda
Hide in cyanide girl you can try nd hide you can try to scream louda
No need for no gun powder that only takes the fun outta
murderin id rather go bimp in nd now you see just how the
f**k I do just what I do when I cut right thru your scalp uh..
s**t wait a minute I mean skull my knife seems dull
Pull another one out unh
 8 years ago '07        #27
dnycem 3 heat pts
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em Flow on "Stay Wide Awake">>>>>>>any flow I heard this year.

His flow on that was just crazy dumb
 10-19-2009, 05:36 PM         #28
whokid 
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 Kumble90 said:
The first verse >>>> The second verse IMO.

I think I smell the scent of a placenta
I enter central park its dark its winter in decemba
I see my target with my car and [B]park it at a poacha tenda[/B]
Young girl by the name of Brenda and I pretend to befriend her
I sit down beside her like a spider hi there girl you mighta
Heard of me before see wh0ore your the girl that ida
Assault and r*pe and figure why not try to make your pus*y wida
f**k you with the umbrella and open it up while the s**ts inside ya
Im the kinda guy thats mild bt I mite blip in get a little bit wilda
Impregnate a lesbian gal and lets see ya have triplets nd milda
Incinegrate them babies as soon as that out ho with formalda
Hide in cyanide girl you can try nd hide you can try to scream louda
No need for no gun powder that only takes the fun outta
murderin id rather go bimp in nd now you see just how the
f**k I do just what I do when I cut right thru your scalp uh..
s**t wait a minute I mean skull my knife seems dull
Pull another one out unh

bra, can u listen??? he said "approach a tender" wtf is a poach a tenda...lol
 10-19-2009, 05:40 PM         #29
whokid 
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 SmokeyTheBlunt said:
he's the only black eminem stan on the planet, confusion and anger is all he knows
lol @ "black Eminem Stan"...

dont get me wrong, Shady is dope, but smoke a blunt, or f**k it drink a beer and listen to Twista...that n*gga may be the nastiest rap n*gga ever in rap.

Case in point, listed to his verse on Jim Jones "Swagger like us remix"...somebody post it...no YouTube at work for me...
 8 years ago '05        #30
YARKONE 4 heat pts
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 whokid said:
bra, can u listen??? he said "approach a tender" wtf is a poach a tenda...lol


yall write these like u have no clue what em rhyme scheme is.

Incinegrate?
 8 years ago '06        #31
Young_Remedy 25 heat pts25
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 AbsLikeJesus said:
Every verse on Way I Am >>>>>>>>>>

I sit back with this pack of zig zags and this bag
Of this weed it gives me the s**t needed to be
The most meanest mc on this -- on this earth
And since birth Ive been cursed with this curse to just curse
And just blurt this berserk and bizarre s**t that works
And it sells and it helps in itself to relieve
All this tension dispensin these sentences
Gettin this stress thats been eatin me recently off of this chest
And I rest again peacefully (peacefully)..
But at least have the decency in you
To leave me alone, when you freaks see me out
In the streets when Im eatin or feedin my daughter
To not come and speak to me (speak to me)..
I dont know you and no,
I dont owe you a mo-therf**k-in thing
Im not mr. nsync, Im not what your friends think
Im not mr. friendly, I can be a prick
If you tempt me my tank is on empty (is on empty)..
No patience is in me and if you offend me
Im liftin you 10 feet (liftin you 10 feet).. in the air
I dont care who is there and who saw me destroy you
Go call you a lawyer, file you a lawsuit
Ill smile in the courtroom and buy you a wardrobe
Im tired of all you (of all you)..
I dont mean to be mean but thats all I can be is just me
i agree with this.. i think stay wide awake is the best track off relapse but the way i am was just bananas and def one of his best songs period
 8 years ago '05        #32
YARKONE 4 heat pts
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 Skateboard T said:
Funny thing is he put that line in bold too
even funnier is that all the lyrics are in the album cover/booklet.


and what is a bimp in?
 8 years ago '04        #33
polorsport2345 8 heat pts
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 thegoldenhero said:
This is bulls**t...i like eminem but damn if you think this is the most complex rhyming songs you a d*ck rider lol this isn't even the most complex song in Eminem discography let alone in history...
thank u, if anything s**t was overly repetitive, I hate hearing the same rhyme scheme throughout a whole damn verse, other emcees could do this but why would they want to, it gets boring in my opinion, thats why it wasnt even my most liked verse in the song, but to the untrained ear or lyricist its mind blowing


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 8 years ago '08        #34
Imagin3 3 heat pts
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i sit back with this pack of zig zags and this bag of this weed that gives me the s**t needed to be the most meanest mc...
/thread.
 8 years ago '08        #35
Imagin3 3 heat pts
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 Da Realness said:
Pun was the best with the mutli flow. He would rhyme within a line like crazy
tell him to stay on beat.
 8 years ago '06        #36
Storchaveli 94 heat pts94
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 slimwillie said:
but you beat them to it so whats that say about you?
LMFAO. I literally busted out laughing with that.
 8 years ago '05        #37
Switchc2390 10 heat pts10
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 Imagin3 said:
tell him to stay on beat.
Your a f**king idiot.

There's a verse on almost every song on Capitol Punishment that does multi's better than that verse.
 10-19-2009, 08:16 PM         #38
Lex Lossis 
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Super Lyrical by Big Pun

You Ain't a k!ller by Big Pun

Dream Shatterer by Big Pun

Tonite by Eminem from Infinite

Infinite by Eminem

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 8 years ago '06        #39
modalee 5 heat pts
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one of the best songs this year but Underground is better.
 10-19-2009, 08:29 PM         #40
Lex Lossis 
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 Imagin3 said:
tell him to stay on beat.
what songs was he not on beat? all signed rappers can flow....it's one of the basics... he wouldnt be signed if this was the case....dont ever tell a n*gga how to rap on his own f**king beat


f**k ahtta hea
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