Is "Stay Wide Awake" one of the most complex rhyming songs in Rap history?

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 8 years ago '04        #1
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Is "Stay Wide Awake" one of the most complex rhyming songs in Rap history?
 

 
So dark and so cold, my friends don't know this other side of me
There's a monster inside of me, it's quite ugly and it frightens me
But they can't see what I can see, there's a vacancy in my tummy
It's making me play hide and seek, like Jason, I'm so hungry
She's nekkid see, no privacy, but I can see she wants me
So patient see, I try to be, but she why does she taunt me
Pulls the drapes and she goes right to sleep, and I creep right through the front see
So blatantly, but silently, cause I know that she's sound sleep
Who's waking me so violently, and why's he on top of me
He's raping me she tries to scream, somebody please get him off me
He's taping me, he's biting me, he's laughing like it's funny
She's scraping me, she's f!ghting me, she's scratching like some dumb freak
Escaping me, no dice you see, I might just be Ted Bundy
Or Satan G, what a sight to see, I'm dancing in my red panties
I'm crazy but it's alright with me, man life can be so empty
Stay away from me, 'cause I'm dancing to quite a different drum beat



The rhyming in that verse alone probably has more rhymes than most rappers whole song.

64 comments for "Is "Stay Wide Awake" one of the most complex rhyming songs in Rap history?"

 10-19-2009, 04:42 PM         #2
snoopdoggiz 
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Internal rhymes are absolutely ridiculous.
 8 years ago '08        #3
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 8 years ago '07        #4
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I was listenin' to this high last night and I was losin' it.. his flow is just f**kin' stupid.
 10-19-2009, 04:48 PM         #5
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They're coming
 10-19-2009, 04:48 PM         #6
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3/4's of joe budden's catalogue is too then...
 10-19-2009, 04:50 PM         #7
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The first verse is better than the verse posted by the thread-starter
 10-19-2009, 04:50 PM         #8
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my fav. song on relapse but i still couldn't f**k with the album. EH. nice rhyme pattern but not exactly something everyone can listen to. still had the exact
 8 years ago '04        #9
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3/4's of joe budden's catalogue is too then...
I have damn near ALL of Joe Budden's tracks and that statement u made is just down right blasphemy. He's not even a great rhymer like that at all, he writes good music, some deep stuff, but he doesn't come close to rhyming like that.
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 The Blueprint˛ said:
They're coming
 8 years ago '04        #11
efromthev 2 heat pts OP
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The first verse is better than the verse posted by the thread-starter
Not as far as rhyming it's not to me. Like the guy said earlier, the internal rhymes are the second verse are nasty.
 10-19-2009, 04:53 PM         #12
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here we go again


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 8 years ago '09        #13
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 efromthev said:
So dark and so cold, my friends don't know this other side of me
There's a monster inside of me, it's quite ugly and it frightens me
But they can't see what I can see, there's a vacancy in my tummy
It's making me play hide and seek, like Jason, I'm so hungry
She's nekkid see, no privacy, but I can see she wants me
So patient see, I try to be, but she why does she taunt me
Pulls the drapes and she goes right to sleep, and I creep right through the front see
So blatantly, but silently, cause I know that she's sound sleep
Who's waking me so violently, and why's he on top of me
He's raping me she tries to scream, somebody please get him off me
He's taping me, he's biting me, he's laughing like it's funny
She's scraping me, she's f!ghting me, she's scratching like some dumb freak
Escaping me, no dice you see, I might just be Ted Bundy
Or Satan G, what a sight to see, I'm dancing in my red panties
I'm crazy but it's alright with me, man life can be so empty
Stay away from me, 'cause I'm dancing to quite a different drum beat



The rhyming in that verse alone probably has more rhymes than most rappers whole song.
This is bulls**t...i like eminem but damn if you think this is the most complex rhyming songs you a d*ck rider lol this isn't even the most complex song in Eminem discography let alone in history...
 8 years ago '04        #14
efromthev 2 heat pts OP
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This is bulls**t...i like eminem but damn if you think this is the most complex rhyming songs you a d*ck rider lol this isn't even the most complex song in Eminem discography let alone in history...
Name something. What is more complex rhyming in Eminem's discography? The only song I can think of off top is "Infinite". But even though he rhymed alot of words in that, he wasn't rhyming whole sentences like he did on this.
 8 years ago '06        #15
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my fav em song time in quite some time, but most complex in rap history is stretching it.
 8 years ago '08        #16
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 slimwillie said:
but you beat them to it so whats that say about you?


this song is real sick though, the beat, the flow, and his rhyme schemes are dope, to bad the whole album wasn't on the level of this of this track (still a good album nevertheless). but its one of the better complex-rhyming songs in recent memory
 10-19-2009, 05:03 PM         #17
The Blueprint˛ 
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 slimwillie said:
but you beat them to it so whats that say about you?
2 posted before me, and your here now
 10-19-2009, 05:05 PM         #18
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Twista >>> Eminem (rhyming-wise)

Thread worthy, actually...
 10-19-2009, 05:05 PM         #19
clickclack 
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dear slim i wrote you but you still ain't callin
 10-19-2009, 05:06 PM         #20
snoopdoggiz 
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 The Blueprint˛ said:
2 posted before me, and your here now
Damn man the RAIDERS? For real?
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